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July 23, 2019 09:39

Hi Naemi

Usually I have ideas to offer, but today the solemn direction of my thoughts won't let me.

Yesterday I'd gone to the older part of city, Chandni Chowk, to understand the water supply problems of our people. While I didn't get a clear cut conclusion, their picture was a world apart from the picturesque clean village that should have been...

I saw a fall not a climb
I saw us among ranks upon which
Our ancestors would have once offered their pity
We stand here in dirt, alone and gritty
We stand here in our lost serendipity

My drive to effect change has emerged stronger. Please help me change what I saw. I apologize for not being able to offer you a suggestion but I'll vote for you in my 15 mins today and drop my vote number. Take care.

Best Regards
Kashwin
https://www.entrepreneurship-campus.org/ideas/22/16112

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July 23, 2019 09:37

Hi Mondi

Usually I have ideas to offer, but today the solemn direction of my thoughts won't let me.

Yesterday I'd gone to the older part of city, Chandni Chowk, to understand the water supply problems of our people. While I didn't get a clear cut conclusion, their picture was a world apart from the picturesque clean village that should have been...

I saw a fall not a climb
I saw us among ranks upon which
Our ancestors would have once offered their pity
We stand here in dirt, alone and gritty
We stand here in our lost serendipity

My drive to effect change has emerged stronger. Please help me change what I saw. I apologize for not being able to offer you a suggestion but I'll vote for you in my 15 mins today and drop my vote number. Take care.

Best Regards
Kashwin
https://www.entrepreneurship-campus.org/ideas/22/16112

July 23, 2019 09:36

Hi Blessing

Usually I have ideas to offer, but today the solemn direction of my thoughts won't let me.

Yesterday I'd gone to the older part of city, Chandni Chowk, to understand the water supply problems of our people. While I didn't get a clear cut conclusion, their picture was a world apart from the picturesque clean village that should have been...

I saw a fall not a climb
I saw us among ranks upon which
Our ancestors would have once offered their pity
We stand here in dirt, alone and gritty
We stand here in our lost serendipity

My drive to effect change has emerged stronger. Please help me change what I saw. I apologize for not being able to offer you a suggestion but I'll vote for you in my 15 mins today and drop my vote number. Take care.

Best Regards
Kashwin
https://www.entrepreneurship-campus.org/ideas/22/16112

July 23, 2019 09:35

Hi Zulfa

Usually I have ideas to offer, but today the solemn direction of my thoughts won't let me.

Yesterday I'd gone to the older part of city, Chandni Chowk, to understand the water supply problems of our people. While I didn't get a clear cut conclusion, their picture was a world apart from the picturesque clean village that should have been...

I saw a fall not a climb
I saw us among ranks upon which
Our ancestors would have once offered their pity
We stand here in dirt, alone and gritty
We stand here in our lost serendipity

My drive to effect change has emerged stronger. Please help me change what I saw. I apologize for not being able to offer you a suggestion but I'll vote for you in my 15 mins today and drop my vote number. Take care.

Best Regards
Kashwin
https://www.entrepreneurship-campus.org/ideas/22/16112

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July 20, 2019 14:02

Hi Oluwafemi

I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for the continued support you have provided me in this competition. I'm here to express that gratitude by voting for you just as you have done so.

I believe we have very few days left to refine our ideas, so at this stage it might be best that we go through our texts, and ask ourselves a few questions: 1. Is my writing comprehensive and easy to understand? 2. Is the message or conclusion upon the first reading the same as I want it to be? 3. Without changing the basic structure, can I add supplementary features that may make my idea even more compelling? That's my bit for you!

I hope you find my advice even a little helpful! Even that would mean so much. And yes, I love the mutual camaraderie that we have come to share and I'd be happy if it continues till the end.

Best Regards
Kashwin
https://www.entrepreneurship-campus.org/ideas/22/16112
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Comment on: E-shyura
July 20, 2019 14:00

Hi Eric

I want to thank you for your continued support and I'm here to express that gratitude by voting for you just as you have done so.

I believe we have very few days left to refine our ideas, so at this stage it might be best that we go through our texts, and ask ourselves a few questions: 1. Is my writing comprehensive and easy to understand? 2. Is the message or conclusion upon the first reading the same as I want it to be? 3. Without changing the basic structure, can I add supplementary features that may make my idea even more compelling? That's my bit for you!

I hope you find my advice even a little helpful! Even that would mean so much. And yes, I love the mutual camaraderie that we have come to share and I'd be happy if it continues till the end.

Best Regards
Kashwin
https://www.entrepreneurship-campus.org/ideas/22/16112
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July 20, 2019 13:51

Hi Boitumelo

I want to thank you for your continued support and am here to express that gratitude by voting for you just as you have done so.

I believe we have very few days left to refine our ideas, so at this stage it might be best that we go through our texts, and ask ourselves a few questions: 1. Is my writing comprehensive and easy to understand? 2. Is the message or conclusion upon the first reading the same as I want it to be? 3. Without changing the basic structure, can I add supplementary features that may make my idea even more compelling? That's my bit for you!

I hope you find my advice even a little helpful! Even that would mean so much. And yes, I love the mutual camaraderie that we have come to share and I'd be happy if it continues till the end.

Best Regards
Kashwin
https://www.entrepreneurship-campus.org/ideas/22/16112
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July 20, 2019 13:43

Hi Shey

I want to thank you for your continued support and am here to express that gratitude by voting for you just as you have done so.

I believe we have very few days left to refine our ideas, so at this stage it might be best that we go through our texts, and ask ourselves a few questions: 1. Is my writing comprehensive and easy to understand? 2. Is the message or conclusion upon the first reading the same as I want it to be? 3. Without changing the basic structure, can I add supplementary features that may make my idea even more compelling? That's my bit for you!

I hope you find my advice even a little helpful! Even that would mean so much. And yes, I love the mutual camaraderie that we have come to share and I'd be happy if it continues till the end.

Best Regards
Kashwin
https://www.entrepreneurship-campus.org/ideas/22/16112
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July 20, 2019 13:39

Hi Somefun

I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for the continued support you have provided me in this competition. I'm here to express that gratitude by voting for you just as you have done so.

I believe we have very few days left to refine our ideas, so at this stage it might be best that we go through our texts, and ask ourselves a few questions: 1. Is my writing comprehensive and easy to understand? 2. Is the message or conclusion upon the first reading the same as I want it to be? 3. Without changing the basic structure, can I add supplementary features that may make my idea even more compelling? That's my bit for you!

I hope you find my advice even a little helpful! Even that would mean so much. And yes, I love the mutual camaraderie that we have come to share and I'd be happy if it continues till the end.

Best Regards
Kashwin
https://www.entrepreneurship-campus.org/ideas/22/16112
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Comment on: SELSDAM
July 20, 2019 13:38

Hi Shailly

I want to thank you for your continued support and am here to express that gratitude by voting for you just as you have done so.

I believe we have very few days left to refine our ideas, so at this stage it might be best that we go through our texts, and ask ourselves a few questions: 1. Is my writing comprehensive and easy to understand? 2. Is the message or conclusion upon the first reading the same as I want it to be? 3. Without changing the basic structure, can I add supplementary features that may make my idea even more compelling? That's my bit for you!

I hope you find my advice even a little helpful! Even that would mean so much. And yes, I love the mutual camaraderie that we have come to share and I'd be happy if it continues till the end.

Best Regards
Kashwin
https://www.entrepreneurship-campus.org/ideas/22/16112
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