Thank you for your comments on my project, I find your project good and will be needed in my country too..email me on [email protected] so we further share how to work together.
the drink idea is innovative and specific to address the given challenge, as an observation looking at the impact try to find how best you can communicate the benefits to beneficiaries is the drink a nutrition supplement or nutrition therapeutic drink or a basic food drink, does it cure blindness or reduce it or merely the drink has nutritious properties that are Vitamin A dense and can reduce blindness.
great idea streamline development objective to be specific, the project brings in a lot of detail that take a little away from the project. As An observation keep the project simple to one specific objective though much of detail is pertinent find a balance that keep project singular.
great exploitation of technology to advance education, as an addition could you highlight on the specific target group and vulnerability and that could possible feed on how we are going to measure impact of your project..Above all the idea is great.
Great idea, simple and innovative way to keep people informed on major developments that affect their lifestyle. As an observation if possible you could streamline your intervention to a specific problem which at the end the impact can be quantified and qualified.
Great initiative what captures me with these project is that you are perfecting an existing concept making more relevant to match challenges in a specific area and yet creating income opportunities. Further solution to address malnutrition and income generation is localized use of available local resources efficiently and effectively.
interesting idea and sound innovative importantly seeking to find solutions within sustainable limits. As an observation can you look on how best and clearly the project be communicated focusing on the objective , interventions and expected results. A good example is simplify how best are the beauty salon going to aid in water and sanitation as a priority based on clear development objective. What is our problem statement, who do we target, our interventions and expected results.
these is a great idea and suit to address the challenge you highlighted in Afghanistan. I see the project making an impact in education not only in Afghanistan but across countries that have a similar education challenge.
In light of the cause my critical contribution is for you to further look onto how far the project reaches to the intended beneficiaries and the mode of other promotion platform. Critically advocate for the Ministry of education to buy into the idea and cascade nationally. In addition i foresee that the same technology could be used to measure quantitatively on numbers reached also work on the qualitative analysis of the actual effect.
Above all great project.